Poetry Thursday #8
Mirror, mirror on the wall
January 26, 2007
by Norma Bruce
You used to be my friend.
We’d hang out together
for hours of girly talk,
share secrets, giggle over
girdles and bobbi pins,
lipstick, powder and mascara.
You used to wait for me.
Chat in the dressing room,
whispering gossip
at the counter where
we’d go to order
double chocolate cherry cokes.
When did you change?
Sometimes I feel you’ve joined
the witness protection program,
embarrassed to see me.
Now you’re pious and prim--
no longer zealous for my best.
Oh, how I miss you, dear heart!
Your face isn’t clear when I squint,
your motives are obscured.
What did I do to offend?
Can’t we go back to the old days,
make silly faces and stay out late?
Here are two others I wrote this week; if you've got a moment. . .:
The vows
When you're falling in love
15 comments:
I'm trying to write a poem about mirrors and failing at the minute, so I particularly enjoyed reading this!
I really like the angle of this, where you are talking to your own reflection as if separated from your own self. I guess things will always change...
Ah, so melancholy! By the way, the answer to your question (in the last two lines) is YES! You must. And p.s. start yesterday. (silly faces are good for the psyche!!)
I love how your reflection has changed and you want what used to be. Looking in the mirror is a good exercise.
Rose
xo
Great poem, I love the "pious and prim" line. I hope you can reconcile with your reflection, you both deserve best.
I love mirrors. I wrote one about that long time back.
Ilike this too.
murrayt, read more poetry. You don't know what is poetry. Rhyming is passe now! I don't call you rude but I do call you ignorant.
gautami
In-between state of consciousness
This was lovely to read. It was cute..reminds me of a sweeter time with girl friends. I really like the "witness protection program" line, that was clever.
I really liked this poem, Norma! I like that it's mostly lighthearted, with just a tinge of regret at the end...
I like the little switcharoo idea of the mirror being the one that changes, nto the person looking into it - it goes well with the fairy tale title...I really enjoyed this piece. Esp. loving "cherry cokes" and "staying out late."
Nice job!
I LOVED this! Delightful!
I'm not sure I've ever been so friendly with a mirror - but I love your personification of it. This feels so whimsical, but there's such a note of disillusionment throughout, it really grounds the poem.
I love the conspiratorial nature of the relationship between the mirror and the person, and the longing in the last lines.
I agree, go back to making silly faces and staying out late. As you get older you are allowed to be outrageous (except around the children who will act horribly embarrassed :) )
I love how you were able to make this playful and poignant at the same time. I also love the details--bobbi pins and double chocolate cherry cokes.
I enjoyed this poem more than anything else I have read on your site-although it is all great. This was really personal-thats what I get into. I don't like mirrors now and I am a youngin' according to most, but men have their issues (HAIR!) :) Thanks for writing something so honest.
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